if you would like to, reply with constructive criticism, this is my "poetry/music" blog lol

That's right everyone, I'm back and with two new poems.  I'm going to keep this back up as a poetry blog again, so please tell me what you think.

Shall sleep rest this troubled soul?

One of whom an angel shall not grace.

For she is far too great for the tangible to reach.

 

The night stays bitter

Hope, covered in frostbite,

Shall turn in ‘till the morn.

 

And from this cold night a new dawn shall soon arise.

Giving with it blissful reds, oranges and yellows.

But from it I shall not arise in cheer.

 

For an angel will stand before me

Close enough to see her beauty

But too far to reach

 

The want to touch is left drown’d

By the want for the angel

To be in her glory

 

And O!  How glorious it is.

That one may never reach.

And yet this one so determined

Will still fall far behind.

 

“The Angel”

On the ground

So cold and hard

Staring up at the sky

So warm and free.

 

Feeling the feathers

Broken in pieces

Laying around

Helpless, as can be seen.

 

The want to soar,

The want for the past

The need for the future

Has been crippled at the seams.

 

Standing up

Beginning to run

To gain the speed

Is the only way to regain what once was.

 

It is the first step

To going into the future

It is the first step

When one’s means has been erased

 

“Clipped Wings”

I know, I already have a poem called "Clipped Wings" but I may retitle this one in the future (or just have two of them to confuse the hell out of people hehe)