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if you would like to, reply with constructive criticism, this is my "poetry/music" blog lol
 
"The Prison"

The Iron clasps fall to the floor
Rusted
Broken

The red around my Ankle
Along with the rust stains,
Has a feeling of relief

The rope around my wrists
Drops to the ground
As the knot became undone

The Bar over my wings
Rolls away
As I stretch them out

And with a running start
I fly away
Leaving behind all regret
Only for happiness.


~~Jake


I got the idea for this one from Prolific day.  lol i love your stuff!

 
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